Book Review: Prizefighter en Mi Casa by e. E. Charlton-Trujillo

Prizefighter en Mi Casa by e. E. Charlton-Trujillo

This book was amazing. Well-written, exciting, scary, heart-warming, and troubling at times. I lived in Houston, Texas until I was eight years old so it was interesting to read about someone growing up in Texas under completely different circumstances than mine. I also loved that the main character was Mexican-American, but couldn’t speak Spanish (where I’m Indian-American and can’t speak much of my mother-tongue, Tamil) so I kind of related to that.

The story is about a young girl named Chula whose very poor family has asked a Mexican fighter to come and fight in a match so that they can basically win some money off of him. The premise felt very unique and I loved the very dark imagery the writer uses to describe the fighter. I did have a few issues with the age of the character, which felt a little inconsistent to me (she felt younger than 12 at times), as well as with her constant denigration of her own potential. Chula repeatedly talks about how Mexicans from her neighborhood, “the Circle” can never amount to anything and never get the chance to be anything, which felt a little untrue since though they *did* have an accelerated learning program at her school and her aunt even had the opportunity to Princeton (though didn’t because she got pregnant).

But all in all, excellent novel with a strong voice and memorable, multi-faceted characters.

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Fall 2010 TV Schedule already up?

The basic cable networks have already announced their shows for the fall. Here’s the schedule over at TV Guide. Why are they releasing their lineup so early? Usually they don’t do it for a long time.

No idea which shows I’m going to try yet. No Ordinary Family looks kind of intriguing though.

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How to Watch TV Like a Novelist Part Two: Questioning the Plot

All right, so last time we talked about characters. Today, let’s discuss plot. Here are some questions to ask yourself when watching TV to inform your own writing:

1) Why did they choose to end the scene there? (And where do you think they are going to pick up when the commercial starts?)

This is what you should wonder when the show skips to commercial, or at the end of the show. Did the scene end at a cliffhanger? Do you still feel interested enough to keep watching, or could you turn off the TV/stop watching the show and not care what happens next? Thinking about the answers to these questions can help you figure out where to end your scenes and chapters.

2) Subplots– do they add to the main plot or detract from it?

Sometimes if the main storyline is too dramatic, TV show writers will add in scenes designed to be lighter in mood or funny to keep us from wanting to turn off the TV. Other times however, side plots just seem to get in the way of what’s going on. Examine your own writing and make sure your subplots are important in some way.

3) Overarching storylines–Where are they going with this?

It’s very difficult to watch a TV show that doesn’t have some underlying story that connects the threads of the episodes. Shows that have some underlying story to them (like Monk’s wife’s death, or the central mystery of the island in Lost) keep us interested. But when they lose sight of the central story, it’s easier for us to stop caring about missing episodes. Likewise, when you’re writing, try not to lose track of where you’re going with the story, otherwise, your readers will get bored.

Next time: Details, details.

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Hot in Cleveland Update: Getting Warmer

This show is really heating up. (HAHA! Okay, sorry. I’ll stop with the puns.) I wasn’t sure about the show at first, but it really is cute and clever. Betty White’s character is hilarious and her hatred for Jane Leeves’s character is too. Good stuff.

If you’re looking for a cute, funny sitcom, check this show out.

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Book Review: The Game by Diana Wynne Jones

The Game by Diana Wynne Jones

(spoiler alert) I picked this book up at the library when I was there looking for something else completely. I’ve been wanting to read one of Jones’s books and the description on the cover about magic and mythology really sucked me in. I love a good fantasy novel.

At first glance, the idea seems a genuinely good one: what would happen if the constellations came to life as real people? I imagine this book is meant to appeal to the Percy Jackson set (I still haven’t read those books). But in practice, the book was difficult to follow and slightly..well…boring (is there a nicer way of saying this?).
Diana Wynne Jones is obviously a masterful writer. One sentence is still memorable to me after closing the book: “Martya was a big strong girl with hair like the white silk fringes on Grandma’s parlour furniture–soft, straight hair that was always swirling across her round pink face.” Lovely. But memorable images and interesting characters are not enough for a good book–what is missing for me is a solid plot.

I’ve summed up the premise in the story in one sentence, but it actually takes quite a while of reading to get there. She starts out introducing an incredibly cute main character and her rambunctious, colorful family, but then when the actual driving conflict is introduced…it all becomes a winding mess. “The game” itself is strange and a little too ethereal to really get a good sense of what is going on. It almost reads as a giant inside joke that is hard to follow for everyone else.

I have heard lots of good things about Jones’s other books (including Howl’s Moving Castle, the movie of which I liked a lot), so I am hardly going to stop reading her writing, but I think perhaps this novel would appeal more to her fans rather than someone reading her books for the first time.

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African American Lives Season 2: History Made Personal and Fascinating

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My sister recommended this show to me. Staying home with a baby can make you feel like your brain is rotting and sometimes all you can do is watch TV. But when crappy reality shows make you want to pull out your hair, try renting African American lives from PBS. (I watched this show on Netflix for Wii–season 1 isn’t available on it  though).

This show is simply fascinating. Henry Louis Gates, Jr. (yes, that Henry Louis Gates) basically takes 11 famous African Americans (and 1 not famous person) and traces their roots back through slavery and into Africa, looking at individual stories. Some if the stories are uplifting–Chris Rock finds out his ancestor, Julius Caesar Tingman, fought in the Civil War–while others are heartbreaking–Maya Angelou discovers an ancestor who was 17 years old when she conceived a child with her 50 year old former slave owner. Using these diverse family stories, Gates teaches American history in a uniquely compelling way.

I can’t recommend this show enough! You have to see it! (And I might just have to rent season one)

PS this show is waayy better than Who Do You Think You Are? which is too repetitive and doesn’t have enough content.

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Book Review: Uglies by Scott Westerfield

I borrowed this book from the library because I couldn’t wait for the friend I was going to borrow it from to get back from Australia. I was about to say I’m glad I did, but because it ended with a cliffhanger, I kind of wish I’d waited :) Now I have to wait to borrow the rest of the books in the series..

Anyway, the book is about a young girl named Tally who is living in a post-apocalyptic future where everyone gets major reconstructive surgery to look “pretty” as soon as they turn 16. But of course things don’t turn out the way she hopes and she has to decide whether to betray her friend and get the operation she wants or to stay “ugly” forever.

This book has it all: romance, adventure, plot twists, and unforgettable characters. My only problem with it though was that I didn’t like the premise as much as I thought I would. I felt that the whole being a “Pretty” versus being an “Ugly” thing was more heavy-handed and moralizing than I would have liked. And I got more than a little annoyed at just the repetition of the words “Uglies” and “Pretties”. Everything in the world seemed to carry one of these names and it became quite wearing. I also disliked one of the reveals that we learn halfway through the book.***

But once I got past that, the book really did take hold. I really love how the author isn’t afraid to be mean to his main character (something I’m trying to do in my own writing). Bad things happen to her and some of them are her own fault, and this serves to really suck you in to the story just to find out how (or if) Tally gets out of trouble.

I really hope my friend gets back from Australia soon so I can borrow the rest of the series

***major spoiler alert**** okay, so the Pretties turn out to have damage done to their brains as part of the operation! What?! To me this reads as: it’s better to be ugly because pretty people are stupid. Oh, unless you have a “thinking” job like surgeon or police officer. Sigh. This was just one step too far for me, though I think the author just meant it to be a stronger motivation behind not wanting to get the operation.

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How to Watch TV Like a Novelist Part One–4 Questions About Characters

I like to watch TV. Everyone knows this. (I even blog about it.) Sometimes I have an excuse to watch, like I had a hard day, or someone is over and wants to watch something with me. But sometimes I really don’t and should be reading a book or working on one of my two current works-in-progress instead. To make myself feel a tiny bit better, I sometimes put my writer’s cap on and at least think a little bit harder about what I’m watching.

Next time you find yourself watching TV when you’re supposed to be writing(of course you never procrastinate, right? right?) here are some questions to ask yourself:

1) Who is the main character of this scene? And why?

Just like in books, TV shows often have a POV (point-of-view) character. Often, the main character is shown by using different camera angles (for example, if the character is sitting at a desk, many shots are shown from the angle of sitting at the desk) or even through voice-overs (which is a little clumsier, I think). For TV shows with multiple main characters, try to figure out why they chose to show the scene through a certain character’s eyes and pay attention to the POV shifts. Did switching POVs add to the plot or just complicate things?

2) Which character(s) do you like? What makes them successful characters?

Obviously you don’t want to copy a character exactly from a TV show (I think people would notice if your character was exactly the same as, say, Blair from Gossip Girl). But you’ll notice that often your favorite characters are the most multi-faceted characters on the show and sometimes this means your favorite character is the “bad guy”. The best thing about bad guys is that they’re allowed to do bad things, where “good guys” often don’t or can’t.

3) Which characters do you hate? Are you meant to hate them? Or are they unsuccessful characters?

Often, it’s the one-sided stereotype characters that I find boring, like the blonde ditz, or the overbearing mother-in-law, (or the one-sided mean girls on high school shows). There is sometimes a point to having these kinds of characters–they move the plot forward, or just add color to a scene, or, like the “Redshirt” characters in Star Trek, someone has to die…(okay maybe that’s not a great example).

4) Would this scene be better with or without a certain character?

This relates a lot to #3. That character you found annoying–did they really need to be there? And is there a character like that in your novel, a character that you could possibly eliminate? Once you’ve crafted and named a character, it’s really hard to let them go, but if they really don’t add anything, it’s best to let them go (again…like some of those Redshirt characters…) If it makes you feel better, maybe you can save them for the “deleted scenes” portion of your novel’s DVD? :)

So next time you’re watching your favorite guilty pleasure show (for me it’s the new Pretty Little Liars) try and think a little bit harder about what you’re watching and use what you’ve learned to inform your writing.

Next time: Questions about the Plot

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The Lost Finale: ?!?

(major spoiler alert)

I promised a Lost finale blog post, and here it is.  Though I’ve waited so long, I’m pretty sure no one cares anymore. To bad so sad. So we finally found out what the parallel universe thing was about. After watching (and loving) the now cancelled FlashForward, I was thinking it might be some big physics lesson, particularly since they had that physicist character on the show.

Nope. Guess what–they’re all dead and in limbo. Lame.

But at least the other storyline was exciting. Some people died, some people escaped, and the island still remains a bit of a mystery. We’re left wondering what happens next, which is a good thing. I kind of wish they hadn’t bothered with the other plot, but oh well. I didn’t hate it enough for it to feel like a waste of time.

What did you think? Were you disappointed by the finale? Or did you love it?

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Hot in Cleveland: Kind of Lukewarm

Last week, I checked out the pilot episode of  Hot in Cleveland on TVLand (who knew I even got this channel?) after my mom and sis said it was funny. The show is about three women from LA who end up in Cleveland and find the natives refreshingly normal. So, they decide to rent a house there, and lo and behold the house comes with a caretaker–a cranky old lady played by Betty White. Hilarity ensues.

So far the show is pretty ho-hum, but with so many great comediennes (Betty White, Jane Leeves from Frasier, Wendy Malick from Just Shoot Me) it has the potential to be hilarious. For me the biggest distraction is the sitcom format–it’s just so dated. But at least they seem to have a live audience instead of a laugh track.

I’m going to keep watching and see how it goes…

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